I feel like the last couple of pages have been somewhat half assed, so I put in quite a bit more time into this one, and redrew the rest of the storyboard to make the paneling a bit more creative.As for the comments on my anatomy, yes I am well aware that I still have a long way to go to become as great as some of the artists I admire. I'm glad to hear that some of you guys think I've improved, I most certainly strive to do so. Yes, I reference at least 3 anatomy books for each page I draw, plus multiple photo references etc. I'm just still not at that level. I wish I had the advanced skills to make Bullet a professional manga when I started, but all I really wanted was to share a story, and if I hadn't started that 3 years ago, I would've never started. So I hope I can keep getting better and better until every pose and every little detail looks proportional, but for now, I appreciate the support of everyone. Just knowing that someone out there is reading my work is more than enough to keep me motivated. : )
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